Mandy ([info]lucky_magenta) wrote,
@ 2006-01-08 01:42:00
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First completed fanfic for fanfic100
Title: Nicotine
Fandom: Rocky Horror Picture Show
Characters: Riff Raff/Magenta, mention of others
Prompt: Taste
Word Count: 827
Rating: PG-13 (alludes to incest - hey, it's Rocky Horror)
Summary: Riff Raff reflects on his sister and her addiction
Author's Notes: Just a short little reflection, as most of my pieces are.

He had grown accustomed to the taste of nicotine on her lips. He mused about her strange love for cigarettes as he watched her sitting on the front steps of the castle, having slipped out for a quiet moment alone while one of Frank's parties raged inside. It was rare to see her looking so small, huddled against the background of the huge castle. She was more like a little girl than a woman, and it was slightly disconcerting.

She hadn't smoked on Transexual. There were no cigarettes on their home planet; it was already a world of giving in to desires and fulfilling fantasies. While alcohol was a large part of society, and there were a few drugs in existence, plain cigarettes were not needed. He had found that many of the Earthlings seemed to smoke in order to either escape, to make themselves appear more attractive, or both. They needed the excitement that something as mundane as nicotine addiction provided.

Frank had started smoking because he had seen a young boy in a leather jacket doing so and had subsequently decided that it was an attractive practice. Columbia seldom joined him in sharing a cigarette; she complained that the smoke wasn't good for her vocal chords. Magenta was a different story. She and Frank had a strange relationship, one that even Riff Raff could never entirely understand. It wasn't exactly friendship...but she was probably the closest thing to an actual friend that the arrogant young transvestite had ever had. He would yell at her as his servant one moment, then turn right around and offer her a drink the next. Oddly enough, his offers never seemed to be in the interest of any sort of sexual relationship. Sex and power were Frank's greatest pleasures, but somehow, he and Magenta had an unspoken understanding that he would never have sex with her or have complete power over her. As much as she despised Earth and their "mission", she only seemed to hate Frank himself when he was cruel to her beloved brother. So as long as she kept up the appearance of being a faithful servant and he never advanced farther than she wished, they seemed to be in a tentative peace treaty, if nothing else.

Frank was the one who had gotten her started on cigarettes. One day, he had offered one to her, and she had taken it, not wishing to cause trouble when it could be avoided. After that, she had smoked at least a handful of them a day, when she could get her hands on them. She had never become a heavy smoker; smoking was something she normally saved for relaxing, and they had precious little time to relax around the castle. Still, her breaks were frequent enough to keep the taste in her mouth for a little while. It was there when she held her tongue against something annoying Frank said, preferring to calm down and save her temper for when it was needed instead of letting it boil up inside of her the way her brother did. It was there when her brother's lips pressed against her own, stealing kisses when they could get away for a moment or when they were alone together at night. The taste had become a part of her, the same way her red lipstick was forever stained upon her lips and the smokey shadows never left her eyelids.

The cigarette dangled unlit from her mouth, the ash-white paper it was rolled in a stark contrast to her blood-red mouth, which was in turn a stark contrast to her ash-white face. He watched her silently, still far enough away so that, lost in her own thoughts as she was, she hadn't yet noticed his presence. She sucked on the end of the cigarette, staring ahead of her with her elbows resting on her knees and her shoulders slightly hunched. In that moment, Riff Raff pitied his sister, so alienated from the world around her. She didn't belong there any more than he did, although she had done a much better job at pretending to fit in. She had always been the more adaptive of the two. Still, looking at her caught between the amber glow shining from the house lights and the pale white reflection of the moon, he had never seen anyone look more out of place. No wonder she needed an addiction to stay sane.

Walking over to her, he took a seat beside her on the step. She barely glanced his way, and he wondered briefly if she had known he was standing there watching her all along. Reaching over, he plucked the cigarette out of her lips, then leaned in to kiss her softly, revelling in the mingled tastes of nicotine and her.




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[info]ibleedmagenta
2006-01-10 03:24 am UTC (link)
I <3 your fics. Sexual without the sex.

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[info]__rosedark
2006-01-12 03:49 pm UTC (link)
(just floated over from our conversation in [info]x_id_x's LJ...)

She and Frank had a strange relationship, one that even Riff Raff could never entirely understand. It wasn't exactly friendship...but she was probably the closest thing to an actual friend that the arrogant young transvestite had ever had. He would yell at her as his servant one moment, then turn right around and offer her a drink the next. Oddly enough, his offers never seemed to be in the interest of any sort of sexual relationship. Sex and power were Frank's greatest pleasures, but somehow, he and Magenta had an unspoken understanding that he would never have sex with her or have complete power over her. As much as she despised Earth and their "mission", she only seemed to hate Frank himself when he was cruel to her beloved brother. So as long as she kept up the appearance of being a faithful servant and he never advanced farther than she wished, they seemed to be in a tentative peace treaty, if nothing else.

Frank and Magenta interaction that doesn't involve rape? Hell yes. I'm of the firm opinion that Magenta is rather fond of Frank in his better moods (or at least when his temper isn't directed at her and Riff), judging from her body language during Sweet Transvestite & Planet Schmanet Janet, so I can totally buy them having that sort of relationship. Nice work.

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[info]lucky_magenta
2006-01-12 11:46 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! I think so, too. While Riff Raff seems to regard Frank with jealousy and hatred, Magenta really seems to be on more friendly terms with him when he isn't pissing her off.

Granted, I tend to change the relationships I write from fic to fic, and if I ever thought of a really good plotline that involved Frank raping Magenta, I can't say I wouldn't write it. But I do agree that the pitiful spineless Magenta is completely overdone and out of character.

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[info]__rosedark
2006-01-13 12:41 am UTC (link)
"I think so, too."

That's pretty relieving to hear - I thought I must be the only in the fandom!

"While Riff Raff seems to regard Frank with jealousy and hatred, Magenta really seems to be on more friendly terms with him when he isn't pissing her off."

Hmmm...Riff Raff and Frank are infinitely more complicated, which is what makes it my favourite relationship in RHPS. I mean, there's moments like when Frank leans over to stroke Riff's hair during Sweet Transvestite, and Riff smiles - not one of his twisted smirks, but this honest-to-god smile that's almost dorky in its adorable sincerity, and Frank looks rather affectionate there to me; and then there's the hotness that is the picture in my icon which makes their relationship hard to pin down and very fascinating to me.

Would you mind if I friended you? I'm really enjoying this.

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[info]lucky_magenta
2006-01-13 12:51 am UTC (link)
By all means, friend me! I've already friended you, hehe.

I think there are many different interpretations to Frank and Riff's relationship. The way I personally see them is this: I believe that Riff Raff's feelings towards Frank are a mixture of jealousy, bitterness, and longing. There are certain looks he gives that makes it seem as though a part of him really wishes he could be WITH Frank, but at other times, it seems as though he wants to BE Frank. Then again, Frank stole credit for his creation. Frank abuses him, Frank neglects and ignores him at times. Therefore, Riff has to be somewhat bitter, and I think that the bitterness he feels is partly what pushes him to kill Frank (although I don't really think he came into the room intending to kill Frank; I think he meant to take him prisoner, and his emotions ran away with him. This also explains Magenta's "WHOA what are you doing?" looks during that scene).

As for how Frank feels about Riff...well, perhaps there is some real emotion mixed up in there. But Frank's basic attitude towards Riff Raff is that he's something to be toyed with. Frank, to me, seems to love leading people on and them dropping them. I think he does this with Riff on occassion...getting the handyman's hopes up just enough to keep him interested and faithful, but never following through.

Anyway, these are just my opinions. Egads, I could write pages upon pages of critical essays on the relationships in Rocky Horror...I'm a loser, I know.

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[info]__rosedark
2006-01-13 01:58 am UTC (link)
"I think there are many different interpretations to Frank and Riff's relationship. The way I personally see them is this: I believe that Riff Raff's feelings towards Frank are a mixture of jealousy, bitterness, and longing. There are certain looks he gives that makes it seem as though a part of him really wishes he could be WITH Frank, but at other times, it seems as though he wants to BE Frank. Then again, Frank stole credit for his creation. Frank abuses him, Frank neglects and ignores him at times. Therefore, Riff has to be somewhat bitter, and I think that the bitterness he feels is partly what pushes him to kill Frank"

Agreed. All of those are elements I definitely see in their relationship.

"As for how Frank feels about Riff...well, perhaps there is some real emotion mixed up in there. But Frank's basic attitude towards Riff Raff is that he's something to be toyed with. Frank, to me, seems to love leading people on and them dropping them."

I would agree that Frank is most definitely used to seeing and treating people - Riff, it would seem, especially - as objects; therefore, if he did have some real emotion for Riff mixed in there...I think it would probably lead to bitterness on Frank's half: being forced to see Riff as something more than an object and deal with feelings he'd probably want nothing to do with, as well as being scared of the idea of Riff holding any emotional power over him (which, if it sounds workable and in character, is pretty much how I plan on writing the early stages of their relationship from Frank's side in this plotbunny for a not-entirely-darkfic Frank/Riff slashfic that I have.)

*comes up for air* I hope that was coherent. ;)

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[info]lucky_magenta
2006-01-13 02:22 am UTC (link)
Oh, yes, it was. And I can't TELL you how delighted I am to hear someone discussing these relationships at length, because it absolutely fascinates me! *takes a moment to clap her hands and squeal happily before regaining composure* Ahem.

I think you have a very valid point when it comes to Frank's feelings about Riff. And, if nothing else, I think it's quite possibly that at one point in time, Frank did feel some real affection for Riff. Maybe before all the power went to his head, if there was a time before that. Love, friendship...who knows? But yes, the idea of Frank being afraid of Riff holding emotional power over him is quite workable and in-character. At least, in my point of view. There are people who don't see Frank as being nearly so complex, and I've heard some valid arguments on that school of thought's behalf.

I will admit that I am a diehard Riff/Magenta shipper, and all my arguments are likely to be tainted with that thought in the back of my head. Still, Transylvanians are very sexual beings, and I do think it's possible and probable for BOTH of them to have relationships with other characters without being unfaithful to one another (although I typically write Magenta being the more...experimental, for lack of a better word, of the two).

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[info]__rosedark
2006-01-13 04:32 am UTC (link)
"And I can't TELL you how delighted I am to hear someone discussing these relationships at length, because it absolutely fascinates me! *takes a moment to clap her hands and squeal happily before regaining composure* Ahem."

I'm totally going into fits of joy over here, too! I love thinking and talking about the character psychology and relationships in RHPS, so this has been a great night for me. Thank you.

"I think you have a very valid point when it comes to Frank's feelings about Riff. And, if nothing else, I think it's quite possibly that at one point in time, Frank did feel some real affection for Riff. Maybe before all the power went to his head, if there was a time before that. Love, friendship...who knows? But yes, the idea of Frank being afraid of Riff holding emotional power over him is quite workable and in-character."

Hmmm...well, for the fic in question, what I meant by early stages was around the night the movie takes place on - it's bizarre post-film fic where supernatural and hopefully b-moviesque hijinks ensue. So, the premise is more that around the time leading up to and on That Night(TM), Frank's feeling especially resentful towards Riff because of all the things I mentioned before, and even though he knows that his hedonistic impulses will win out in the end and he'll give in to those feelings for Riff eventually, he really doesn't want to give up the decadence and power that using people as objects has afforded him, which is all making him very inclined to lash out at Riff and throw himself even further into using others. Is that still workable and in-character, do you think?

"There are people who don't see Frank as being nearly so complex, and I've heard some valid arguments on that school of thought's behalf."

Personally, I always liked to think of Frank as being more three-dimensional. I think it must be the "rose tint my world / keep me safe from my trouble and pain" towards the end of his solo in W&UT; which implies that he does have some issues/feelings (along with I'm Going Home, of course, but that gets written off sometimes as just manipulation, which is a valid interpretation, although I do disagree with it, personally).

"I will admit that I am a diehard Riff/Magenta shipper, and all my arguments are likely to be tainted with that thought in the back of my head. Still, Transylvanians are very sexual beings, and I do think it's possible and probable for BOTH of them to have relationships with other characters without being unfaithful to one another"

Definitely. And really, I always think of Riff and Magenta as being kind of absolutely and inextricably bound to each other.

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[info]lucky_magenta
2006-01-13 07:37 pm UTC (link)
Hmm...well, I see your point, about Frank and Riff and That Night(TM). I think it's workable in a fanfiction. It doesn't really fit with my personal feelings about the subject, but really, I've seen wonderful fanfics written with relationships that I really never even thought possible. Like I said, I'm more inclined to believe that Frank and Riff may have had a much better relationship in the past, before the work on Rocky really got into full swing.

However, I will say that I do agree that Frank may still admire Riff Raff, to some degree. After all, Riff WAS the mastermind behind Rocky, no matter what Frank may pretend (which also puts a very interesting twist on Riff and Rocky's relationship, but that's another topic entirely). Frank taking credit for Rocky makes Riff bitter, and with Frank's psyche, he probably tries to convince himself into thinking that he really WAS responsible for the muscle man. But a part of him still knows that it was really Riff's doing, and while Frank may harbor some jealousy towards Riff for that, I think there may be some admiration for his skill there, too.

It's interesting to think of Riff being jealous of Frank while all the while Frank is somewhat jealous of Riff.

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[info]__rosedark
2006-01-13 10:09 pm UTC (link)
"Hmm...well, I see your point, about Frank and Riff and That Night(TM). I think it's workable in a fanfiction. It doesn't really fit with my personal feelings about the subject, but really, I've seen wonderful fanfics written with relationships that I really never even thought possible."

I'm glad you think it's workable in concept. It occurs to me that it's kind of rude of me to be talking about my fic in your ficjournal, so I'll stop now. With my apologies. But thanks for the discussion. *glomp*

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[info]lucky_magenta
2006-01-13 11:58 pm UTC (link)
Oh, by all means, don't stop on my account! I'm thrilled to be talking about Rocky Horror any day! I don't find it the least bit rude.

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[info]__rosedark
2006-01-14 03:46 am UTC (link)
"I'm thrilled to be talking about Rocky Horror any day! I don't find it the least bit rude."

Aw, I'm glad. I'm trying to organize my thoughts so I can post a proper run-down of the Frank/Riff Plotbunny of Doom in my journal, so, we could talk about it then, if you're interested.

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[info]lucky_magenta
2006-01-14 04:47 am UTC (link)
*nods* Very much so. I'll keep my eyes open for it.

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